wow. lots of potential there. it's drawn a lot better than most animations i've seen. it's a little jerky, but i'm sure you'll get past that. keep on truckin'!

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Thank you so much!! This is only my 3rd animation ever and my 2nd completely drawn-on-the-computer one, so hopefully if I keep practicing, I can get better! ^____^

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Nice job!! ^^ The wings are very nice, great anatomy. Only suggestion on the wings is that I think they should expand more when flying.
For future animations, I would suggest making all seperate pictures. That way, you can make every part of the body move and it looks more real. Here, only the wings have movement, and thus only they look really.. real x3 I would suggest flash for this, if you have it (and if not..... heh..... note me if ya wanna... "look into it" x3) Also, don't worry about making each frame look perfect and smooth when you initially draw them. I only do the basic body parts and eye/nose placement for the draft of the animation, and then go back and refine each frame (this makes for a lot nicer animation I think).
I love seeing animations, and as stated above, this is much nicer than many animations I usually see. I aggree that there is a lot of potential. Keep it up, and I'd looove to see more animations from ya!!

i have no doubt. it is very well done.

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i love my mommy because she fucked my dad...

It's very beautiful!! ^0^! My suggestion is making the body rise and fall differently.. like, when the wings go up, the body goes down, some of your body movements are a lil' too quick for the wings ^w^ But it WAAAY better than what I could do AWESOME @w@ *foam*

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Psycho...?! WHERE??!!?!??!

Wow, for one of your first animations (meaning you haven't done a lot) this is really good. ^^ It's a bit weird how she bobs, but I understand. Animations aren't the easiest. Xx;

Wow. The bobbing is good. I like it a lot.

You should put it into Flash and make a full fledged movie. Complete with sounds. You whoosh through your teeth for the wind.

Hey, it's summer and I just had ice cream. Not soy ice cream. REGULAR ICE CREAM! I'M NOT ALLERGIC ANYMORES!

- Kylie, delighted

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oooo, thanks so much Kirsten for the long critique! I'll definetely refere back to this comment on my next animation ^_______^. Aaaannnnddd....*goes off to beg to you in our AIM note x3*

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Thank you! I did trrryyyyyy to do that....but it didn't work out quite like I thought it would x3;.

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